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Monday, 30 December 2019

In the prison

I think that if I was in prison.....     it would be terrible. It would be scary to be in prison. I would not want to go there because there could be people there that would be mean to me. Last of all it do not want to be there because I will not be with my family and I love my family.
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3 comments:

  1. Emma SLJ2 January 2020 at 16:37

    Kia ora Erika,

    Great work on completing another Summer Learning Journey activity - keep up the good work. Don’t forget to comment back to blog commenters as well as on others SLJ blog posts to gain extra points.

    I can see you have thought about how hard it would have been for Nelson Mandela in prison and I think you are right, that it would be terrible and scary. Being away from your family would be very sad especially when I can see how much you love yours.
    For this activity it asks you to do your task like a diary entry, I'd love to see you go back and re-read the task and put your words into a diary format.
    I'll check back in and see how you went soon :)

    Until next time, happy blogging :)
    Emma

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  2. Ms Lange3 January 2020 at 23:58

    Hi Erika
    I will email you a diary entry example so you know what Emma means.
    Happy New Year!
    Ms L

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  3. Mikey SLJ16 January 2020 at 14:33

    Mōrena Erika,

    Congratulations on completing another activity! It's wonderful to see how much time and effort you've put into working on the Summer Learning Journey programme - he whetū koe! :) (You're a star!)

    While I'm here I just wanted to let you know that there's only one week left of the Summer Learning Journey and Emma and I would love to see some more of your wonderful work before the programme wraps up on the 24th of January (next Friday). You shared some great posts earlier in the programme but I've noticed that you haven't been as active recently. There's still plenty of time to jump back online and have a go at some of the activities you haven't done yet.

    Remember, the more activities you do, the more points you could earn! :)

    Have a great day, Erika. I hope to see more posts from you soon. :)

    Mā te wā,

    Mikey

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